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    http://thefwf.com/results/11/

    Match of the Night:
    Segment of the Night:
    Thoughts on show length?:
    Enough matches or no?:
    Is the formatting easy to read or no?:
    Favorite piece of writing?:
    Commentary Line of the night?:
    • Introduction
    • Something Something Something
    • :Kentucky Tarzan vs. B.R. Ellis
    • Iíve been a good boy...
    • :Raging Dead vs. Jace Wheeler
    • It's a Blood Bath
    • :Lunchbox Larry vs. Kenneth Williams
    • : Pandemonium
    • Michael Byrd vs. Shawn Kutter
    • : Ellis Has Words
    • Harry Black vs. Lance Mingle
    • : Lunchbox Larry and the Meaning of Christmas
    • Stalker vs. Daniel Leslie
    • It All Leads to This
    • Lunchbox Larry vs. The Raging Dead

  • #2
    Match of the Night: Main Event
    Segment of the Night: Bobby Dean arrival dressed as Santa. One of my favourite e-wrasslers!
    Thoughts on show length?: Great for a PPV
    Enough matches or no?: Yes
    Is the formatting easy to read or no?: Was easy enough to read, even on mobile.
    Favorite piece of writing?: Kentucky Tarzan entrance stood out.

    Great show!
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    • #3
      Introduction - Easily, simple opening to the event. Nothing to report home about.

      Something Something Something - I had that weird issue reserving a spot, and then I forgot to come up with a clever name. Ah well. This segment was a callback to Jaime Reyes in SFT last year, where he was co-owner of a comic book shop and all of my promos took place there.

      Kentucky Tarzan vs. B.R. Ellis - That Tarzan entrance. Sweet Baby Jesus. Good match. I like the ref interaction.

      Iíve been a good boy... - The letter to Santa was adorable. Larry's relationship with his mom is good stuff.

      Raging Dead vs. Jace Wheeler - Everyone writes my character better than I do. Well done there. Barely beating the ten count is nice. Wheeler taking control and out-wrestling RD was the right move. Forehead bites are fun. I use them in real life as well. Best way to do my finish is outta nowhere. I dig that.

      It's a Blood Bath - Good introductory segment for Kutter. Precise. I like the baseball bat being more than just a weapon. It's a part of him.

      Lunchbox Larry vs. Kenneth Williams - I wrote this. I liked this match a lot. I definitely took liberties and created signature moves. Fried Chicken Wing might be my favorite thing ever.

      Pandemonium - Totes excited for the next show. I'm going to write fun stuff.

      Michael Byrd vs. Shawn Kutter - Kutter is a big dude! Holy fudge! Ohhhh Kutter is a biter, too? I like this guy. Byrd shows a lot of fire throughout and doesnt give up without a fight. I figured Kutter would win because, ya know, Chicken Leg.

      Ellis Has Words - Simple segment. He is sure there will be another match with KT. I'd also like to see that.

      Harry Black vs. Lance Mingle - I wrote this. I liked this match a lot. Dang that finish came outta nowhere.

      Lunchbox Larry and the Meaning of Christmas - Larry thinking Buddy is Santa... wonderful. Larry is one of my favorites here.

      Stalker vs. Daniel Leslie - SANTA IS HERE! SANTA IS HERE! SANTA IS HERE! Oh, it's Bobby Dean. That's fine, too. Surprising finish, to say the least. Nobody saw that coming. UTA Hardcore Title with FWF sticker on it?! YES! THAT'S THE BEST!

      It All Leads to This - Yup.

      Lunchbox Larry vs. The Raging Dead - Starting off with biting! Yeahhhhh. That's the good stuff. Good shit before the match even begins. That's how you main event MAWA, man. Larry having a distinct size advantage makes for a fun time. RD putting up a heck of a fight. Referee not letting RD use the stairs worked well into the Knuckle Sandwich. Trapson would have let RD use the stairs because he'd be too drunk to care. Very, very good match. The right guy won. Lunchbox Larry is a bonafied star... and his stock only rises by beating a badass monster like Raging Dead.

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      Match of the Night: Lunchbox Larry vs. Raging Dead

      Segment of the Night: Shawn Kutter's "It's a blood bath"

      Thoughts on show length?: Really good for a pay per view. This would be exhausting to bust our asses this much for a weekly show. Haha.

      Enough matches or no?: Perfect.

      Is the formatting easy to read or no?: Very easy. I read it on mobile a few hours ago, then looked it over on my laptop to do the feedback. Both were easy to read.

      Favorite piece of writing?: Stalker vs. Daniel Leslie

      Commentary Line of the night?: (aaaaand I wrote it)

      McTaggert: Now he's thinking clearly. All of his marijuana pills must be wearing off.
      Decker: MarijuanaÖ pills?
      McTaggert: Daren the Lion told me to say no to drugs.

      Extra Bonus Feedback: Those motherfudging micros were the coolest! The entrances were nice. Showing the two side by side in the ring was my favorite, especially the size differences with Byrd/Kutter. Also, SANTA! The only one missing was Lunchbox Larry as FWF World Champion, which I'm sure will be coming soon. Really cool stuff. It adds so much to the overall presentation of the show and this fed in general. Everyone gets 10/10 for everything they did for MAWA.

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      • #4
        Originally posted by Ben View Post
        http://thefwf.com/results/11/

        Match of the Night: gotta go Leslie v Stalker featuring Santa Dean
        Segment of the Night: Something Something Something
        Thoughts on show length?: perfect
        Enough matches or no?: yup
        Is the formatting easy to read or no?: yup! Read well on mobile!
        Favorite piece of writing?: Torn between Ben tipping Larryís intro music or Ben ripping Larryís log dog nickname... both will be disposed of shortly TYVM lol
        Commentary Line of the night?:

        McTarrgert: Itís spilling to the outside now, Alan

        Decker: Gee! Thanks, John Madden!
        • Introduction

          Nice, little intro. Decker coming off overly positive caught me off guard I always take him as the more reserved / cynical but thatís prob just in my head.

          Nice foreshadowing on the Santa line after making it farther down results.
        • Something Something Something

          Thought this was an awesome first seg. Great show preview and hype building
        • :Kentucky Tarzan vs. B.R. Ellis
        I wrote this one. Had fun with Tarzan. Glad the vine entrance got over!
        • Iíve been a good boy...
        also wrote this obviously
        • :Raging Dead vs. Jace Wheeler
        Legit match for well deserving competitors here. Really liked how Jace would keep celebrating after gaining advantages instead of capitalizing. Liked Raging Deads tenacity it was well written.
        • It's a Blood Bath
        nice hype seg to build up his match. I like Kutter taking the obviously funny set up to the match 110% serious
        • :Lunchbox Larry vs. Kenneth Williams
        This is EXACTLY the type of match I could see going down between LL and KW. Loved the dueling chants. Loved KW spending time with the top chef and porn actress. Loved the Knuckle Sandwich out of nowhere. LOVED the respect after the bell!
        • : Pandemonium
        • Michael Byrd vs. Shawn Kutter
        Expected the result but love how it got there! Wasnít expecting the match to be as long and action packed but pleasantly surprised just as the commentators summed up at the end!
        • : Ellis Has Words
        unexpected seg for B.R.! Iím a little sad you no sold the bell shot to the head he took earlier though!
        • Harry Black vs. Lance Mingle
        Enjoyed reading this one! was excited to see the debut of Lance Mingle! Had a feeling we knew the outcome with 2 rps to 1 but was still a real fun read!
        • : Lunchbox Larry and the Meaning of Christmas
        last second seg @brand and I put together. Had fun hammering this out and really like how it came together!
        • Stalker vs. Daniel Leslie
        fucking awesome. Once again Ben surprises big time. I popped at Santa as I was wondering what Mr Halkum would do with the double no show, then MY BOY BOBBY DEAN WHO IVE BEEN PESTERING TO NO END TO JOIN THIS PLACE IS IN... AND HARDCORE CHAMP? Iím so goi go to bug George 10000% harder now
        • It All Leads to This
        cute little Prematch lead
        • Lunchbox Larry vs. The Raging Dead
        this was incredible to read. I really thought Raging Dead was walking away with the title. I havenít felt like this reading through a match for at least 5 years. Loved the PPV. Wouldíve loved it no matter the result of the tourney. Proud to have competed with the other 3 semi finalists. Everyone did this kickoff justice!

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        • #5
          Match of the Night: Main Event was a great read, So It gets my vote, I also enjoyed Lance Mingle and Harry Black!

          Segment of the Night: Lunchboxx Larry's letter to Santa. Hahahaha

          Thoughts on show length?: Perfect, fun read, only took me just over an hour.

          Enough matches or no?: YUS

          Is the formatting easy to read or no?: Yep, not a million colors, so I enjoyed that.

          Favorite piece of writing?: Bobby Dean showing up as Santa and stripping down.

          Commentary Line of the night?:
          McTarrgert:
          Folks, Raging Dead brought it tonight. There is no denying. But Lunchbox Larry will walkout the champion to cap off a night no one will ever forget.

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