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[SHOW REVIEW] LCW: Full Throttle - 11.9.19

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  • [SHOW REVIEW] LCW: Full Throttle - 11.9.19

    FED:
    Lonestar Championship Wrestling
    FED URL:https://twitter.com/LCW_Texas
    SHOW LINK: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...YhS1_tOkI/edit
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    The way I do show reviews, is I leave live feedback as I read through. I will give an overall opinion at the end of the review. Lets get it!



    FIRST LOOK
    42 pages on Google Docs is kind of scary at the first glance, but it looks real clean and smooth so the experience shouldn't be a bad one in terms of readability. It's very crisp and cleanly put together.


    GET READY TO HURT
    Holy crap, what an interesting way to write for an Efed. This is the definition of novel style as it's like reading a book. However, in the first few sentences I already have a backstory and know what recently happened. This is definitely how you present your product to a first time reader.

    Out of the gate, first segment in and I am impressed. I can tell you now, this is not the style for everyone, but it is the style of a professional. My immediate worry is if you go with this style full time, and at the length this appears to be, how are you combating burnout?


    JUST WHAT WE NEED
    HOLY HELL. More history, even going back to history of the hobby as a whole. The writing is superb, the presentation marvelous. I've got a feeling that most of this review is going to be positive from this point as it is very rare to have such a unique and well done presentation in general.


    BONESHAKER vs GOSCH
    Can't get over how pretty it is yet still so plain. No commentary as it's presented in the same novel type approach we were already welcomed to in the beginning of the show, and it works great. If you want a lesson on descriptive writing in a match, look no further than here so far. The only thing that would make it better for me personally, and this is just me preference, is really well done commentary included. I feel the writers here could really present something magical. But I can see why they would opt not to do commentary with how much effort was put into the actual writing.


    NO BONES ABOUT IT
    Great post match segment that continues the awesome writing trend.


    At this point, I am going to just read the show and if anything jumps out at me needing to be mentioned I will, but from the first words on the screen I'm seeing one of the most consistent and well put together shows I've seen in a long time.


    THE PURE CLASS STUFF
    Unfortunately after deciding to just enjoy the show, I was jarred out of the experience by the way the formatting is for the next couple of segments. Presented as a video format provided by another fed it seems the way it's presented while unique just kills my vibe. Instead of boxes, maybe just go with an indention next time?


    Back to just enjoying the regular show.



    Errr.. I'm confused by the advertisement for WrestleFest 2018... Wrong date on accident? But it was mentioned a couple times. It's 2019 right?

    Oh, never mind. It looks like they are advertising a live screening of a past event. Kind of neat.


    OVERALL OPINION
    Wasn't as scary as I first thought. The formatting is what caused the show to be so many pages, but it was an easy read and man.. just really, really good. The presentation is something others should strive for, even if they add their own unique style to it. The way things flow and are broken up really immerses you into the experience. I could visualize the show in my head and honestly THAT is how you know you have something special.

    The fact I was given enough history to catch up with it being my first time reading their show was also great. You have to think, there's always going to be someone who clicks a show link and reads your stuff for the first time. If they aren't given any background, they are lost right away. LCW did a good job of addressing this with this show. I really suggest you follow them on twitter and check out their stuff.
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